Commission Control
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Commission Control

Kibi

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Create Y2K pop-R&B lyrics for a powerhouse female vocal, theme centered on a 20-year-old retail worker who quits her dead-end mall job on the spot after catching her sneaky coworker trying to steal her commission on a luxury designer bag sale. Tone is unapologetically sassy, cocky, playful, with sharp, relatable one-liners. Imagery includes neon mall food court signs, scuffed platform sneakers, crumpled name tag tossed in a trash can, glittery lip gloss glinting under store lights. Music parameters: BPM 122, key G major with fleeting E minor inflections in the pre-chorus. Core instrumentation: bouncy Pharrell-style 808 drum grooves, syncopated Timbaland-esque percussion hits, bright synth brass stabs, muted nylon string guitar arpeggios, warm sub-bass drops, layered 10-deep vocal ad-libs with short whistle-register flourishes in the post-chorus. Follow structure: tension-building pre-chorus lift, explosive anthemic chorus, even catchier spoken-sung post-chorus hook. Reference Britney Spears’ playful snark, Destiny’s Child’s confident energy, Christina Aguilera’s vocal swagger.

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[Intro]
[Verse]
Glitter lip gloss under neon lights
Walking left to right
Designer leather on the shelf
I sold it all myself
You tried to swipe my sale
Your little plan will fail
[Pre-Chorus]
I saw you lurking near the register
Trying to be a clever predator
But I am the editor
And you are just a competitor
[Chorus]
Keep the commission, I’m out
Hear the whole food court shout
I’m throwing down my keys
Doing exactly what I please
No more folding clothes
That’s just how it goes
[Post-Chorus]
Bye-bye, baby, I'm gone
Cry till the dawn
Name tag in the bin
Look at me, I win
[Verse]
You thought I wouldn't see
Stealing from me
Under the fluorescent glow
I run the show
Watch me walk away
Nothing left to say
[Pre-Chorus]
I saw you lurking near the register
Trying to be a clever predator
But I am the editor
And you are just a competitor
[Chorus]
Keep the commission, I’m out
Hear the whole food court shout
I’m throwing down my keys
Doing exactly what I please
No more folding clothes
That’s just how it goes
[Post-Chorus]
Bye-bye, baby, I'm gone
Cry till the dawn
Name tag in the bin
Look at me, I win
[Bridge]
No more retail blues
In my platform shoes
Walking out the door
Not working here anymore
This bag is mine to keep
Your lies are cheap
[Chorus]
Keep the commission, I’m out
Hear the whole food court shout
I’m throwing down my keys
Doing exactly what I please
No more folding clothes
That’s just how it goes
[Post-Chorus]
Bye-bye, baby, I'm gone
Cry till the dawn
Name tag in the bin
Look at me, I win
[Outro]

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